Freedom with defined boundaries

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Don’t bound my freedom
Don’t define my boundary

Let me fly high in the limitless sky
The body feels so light floating in the air

Let me dive deep in the vast blue sea The corals at the bottom are so enchanting

Let me climb to the highest peak of the mountain
The view from the top is breath-taking

Let me venture out in the wild
There is a freshness in its vicinity

Don’t bound my freedom
Don’t define my boundary

Let me sing as if no one is listening
The lyrics of the song adds peace to my soul

Let me dance to my favourite music
The beats empowers my inner core

Let me laugh like a child
The roar of laughter keeps the child in me alive

Let me cry my heart out
The tears reliefs me from the grief and pain

Don’t bound my freedom
Don’t define my boundary

Let me spend a day in solitude
The quietude calms my mind

Let me shout at the top of my voice
The lungs open up to breathe easy

Let me explore the hidden beauty of the world
The treasure in its bosom is mesmerising

Let me live this life to the fullest
The journey is more beautiful than the destination

Don’t bound my freedom
Don’t define my boundary

 

Rashmi Jain

Hi, I'm Rashmi. I'm here to experiment, explore, experience and express life and would like my readers to embark on this journey of Words along with me. Let's believe in the magic of Words.

This Post Has 22 Comments

  1. momlearningwithbaby

    Wow. love the expressions. Freedom and boundaries are such vast concepts, unique to everyone, different meaning for everyone.
    #MyFriendAlexa #momlearningwithbaby

    1. Rashmi

      Thanks for your lovely comment on this take of freedom:)

  2. sujatatawde

    You have versed it verbatim . How many times in our life , we remind ourselves ‘Don’t bound my freedom , Don’t define my boundary ‘. We cherish our freedom , to free ourselves from many vices , inner as well as outer.

    1. Rashmi

      Thanks for your valuable comments Sujata:)

  3. snehal joshi

    Lovely poem..keep it up

    1. Rashmi

      Thank you Snehal:)

  4. Manas Mukul

    Good work Rashmi. Hope to see more of such stuff.
    #MyFriendAlexa #ContemplationOfaJoker #Jokerophilia

    1. Rashmi

      Thank you Manas for the appreciation:)
      Would definitely plan to come up with more such posts.

  5. Veena

    Beautifully written! But i believe through education, one has to push through. Freedom has to be fought for <3

    1. Rashmi

      Thanks Veena for the read:)
      Agree, nothing comes easy dear. Everyone has to fight for their rights and freedom.

  6. Keerthi Vydyula

    Very well versed poem. It has a deeper meaning hidden in those simple words.

    1. Rashmi

      Sometimes simple words can have a deep impact on our heart and soul. Glad that you liked it Keerthi:)

  7. Geethica

    Freedom is often self-defined. I want to sing aloud as if nobody is listening….. these lines define the purity of soul.

    1. Rashmi

      Glad that you can connect with it Geethica:)

  8. PrettyMummaSays

    Lovely! Made for a good read. Keep going…

    1. Rashmi

      Thanks a lot ☺️

  9. Nice poem. Touched my heart 🙂 Though it seems odd, freedom is real when it has some boundaries, otherwise, it becomes anarchic.

    1. Rashmi

      Thank you so much for your comments!
      I do understand sometimes freedom needs to be supplied with limitations as in the case of small kids, who don’t know what the world holds for them.

      Here, I’m talking about the absolute freedom of which the women have their rights on. You can’t opt for a full time job as you have a kid to look after. You can’t go for a solo trip as it’s not safe are just few examples.
      Don’t overburden her and let her live her share of life is the message.

      Hope I’m able to convey the message.

  10. Meha Sharma

    Poignant. Great verse Rashmi.

    1. Rashmi

      Thanks a lot Meha ☺️

  11. Ashwini

    Nice poem! 🙂

    1. Rashmi

      Thank you dear ☺️

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